Chapter Five

Chapter Five is now up.

For some reason it hasn't gone to the top of the listing, like it has before, but the link should still work.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2792473/1/The_Forgotten_Village

I hope you like it. I tried to skip yet more description and go for some action. Raymond Chandler said that whenever he was stuck he had a man come through the door with a gun, and took it from there.

Hester - thank you so much, I am glad that it flows. My aim is to tell a story and people get caught up in the story, not the writing. You make it sound like it is working. I really appreciate that

Everyone - actually, I really really really appreciate all the support I am getting with the writing, especially from dear heart.

Now I am off to start the next chapter.