Chapter Seven is up.
I am not as confident, but I have put in the public arena otherwise I will be agonising over it till Doomsday.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2792473/1/The_Forgotten_Village
Going to carry straight on. My internal lady bits are not being polite and I need something to distract me.
3 comments:
Hi Sybil, I see no reason to agonise over chapter 7, it flows well & adds to the plot.
Thank you - I really appreciate your kindness. WSx
I liked it, too, Sybil - it's great! My only comment would be that you repeat the phrase "warm but not too warm" but maybe you meant to?
I love the way the storyline is developing - and I haven't a clue where it is going - brilliant!
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