Saturday 1 May 2010

Writing

Chapter Seven is up.

I am not as confident, but I have put in the public arena otherwise I will be agonising over it till Doomsday.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2792473/1/The_Forgotten_Village

Going to carry straight on. My internal lady bits are not being polite and I need something to distract me.

3 comments:

Hard up Hester said...

Hi Sybil, I see no reason to agonise over chapter 7, it flows well & adds to the plot.

Wannabe Sybil said...

Thank you - I really appreciate your kindness. WSx

Morgan said...

I liked it, too, Sybil - it's great! My only comment would be that you repeat the phrase "warm but not too warm" but maybe you meant to?

I love the way the storyline is developing - and I haven't a clue where it is going - brilliant!