The first part of my writing...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2792473/1/The_Forgotten_Village
Please have a look. Now that it is in the open I feel it is important to keep adding to it, and I will let you know when some more is added.
I hope those who are interested like it.
6 comments:
Hope it is not too scary - I am putting Catherine Alliott aside tonight to read this, so printing it off to take to bed with a cup of tea!
Delighted for you that you have it "out there" now! Will let you know how much I like it tomorrow,
Hugs,
Morgan
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I really hope you like it - more to follow soon.
*waits on pins*
WS x
Don't leave it too long - we want to read more! We like it (my elder daughter and I) and she is asking me when she can read some more...
It's mysterious, interesting, good level of suspense, I can keep track of the characters: I like it a lot.
Only thing was, you might have warned me how much of it there is - I know you said how many words, but I can't translate wordage into A4 page printouts: there were a LOT! Note to self to buy more ink asap...before Sybil publishes more!
Enjoyed it very much. Don't usually read fantasy/horror, what genre would you call it? I liked all the characters, not too many to get a fuddled brain like mine confused. Am looking forward to the next chapter
Your story is absolutely brilliant! Now you don't have time to blog (although I like that, too), so get writing!
Mary
Really liked where the story is going and am keen to read the next installment.
Would it be possible for you to chapterise it a bit? I'm happy to find it online but found that if I "put it down" to go and do something else, it was not easy to find my place again. Chapters don't need to be particularly short, it's not an attention span issue. Doesn't need to be formal chaptering, even just a marker for example, a tilde "~" or two "~~", and a few blank lines where there is a natural break would be fab.
Looking forward to the next installment, thanks for sharing.
Hazel
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